Tuesday 27 November 2007

A Creepy Story

Hello! :)

I have no idea why, but last night and this morning, I just felt like scaring myself with scary stories and supernatural tales. Obviously, they're not even remotely believable, but they can still creep you out.

My favourite kind of creepy story is where everything seems fine until the twist at the end. :)

Can anyone else relate?


Anyways, here's one of the ones that made the cut with me. More than half of them were actually more lame than scary, but writing is a dying art after all.

P.S. You'll have to highlight the text to read it, I don't want to unintentionally give someone nightmares or a fear of keyholes and hotels.


A man, at about the age of 30 went to a hotel and walked up to the front desk to check-in. The woman at the desk gave him his key and all, and told him that on the way to his room, there was a door with no number that was locked and no one was allowed in there. So he went to his room, and went to bed. The next night he was curious as to what was in the room, so he walked down the hall to where it was and of course tried the handle. Sure enough it was locked. So he bent down and looked through the keyhole. What he saw was a hotel bedroom and in the corner was a woman whose skin was completely white. She was leaning up against a wall and her head was facing the wall. He stared in confusion for a while then went back to his room. The next day, he went back to the room and looked through the keyhole. This time, all he saw was redness. He couldn’t make anything out, all he saw was red.


At this point he was confused and a little freaked out. He went to the front desk and asked the lady about the room. She sighed and said, "Did you look through the keyhole?" The man told her that he had and the lady said, "Well, I might as well tell you the story. A long time ago, a man murdered his wife in that room, and her ghost haunts it. But these people were not ordinary. They were white all over, except for their eyes, which are red."


Hope you guys enjoyed that. :)

Till next write --

4 comments:

steph said...

nice story there... haha


man, commenting on your blog takes forever.

Anonymous said...

he was looking into that girl's eyes, yeah? XD;

ahahaha ... i feel stupid ... -o-

Jacky said...

Well, yeah. Or she was looking at him. Either works.

[~ vonnie ~] said...

ahhh >< me get goosebumps now T_T